Captivity Narrative

1.  Shiloh JoliePitt

2. Jennifer Aniston


                A new day, a new game, a new outfit. Well what will I do today? Let’s go. Oh there’s mommy! She now picks me up and takes to drink my morning milk and watch my daily show; Mini Einstein’s! I love them! Vivienne and Knox are here now. I really wish they could talk, life would be much less boring. My show got ruined thanks to those drooling babies, I better go wander around. Finally Maddox is up I’ll ask him if he wants to play outside. “Shiloh we cannot go outside! There is a big party today ad mommy wants it all to be perfect!” Now that is great! First my show is ruined and now I cannot play outside! “Hey Shiloh come! Let’s go play cars in the kitchen.” As always Maddox has the best games in the house, Zahara only plays with stupid babies and barbies, and the twins well, they only drool and cry. After two hours of making car tracks in the kitchen my mommy called me up to my room. I was really exhausted and did not want to do anything but take my nap. “Shiloh honey you need to get dressed, it is time for the part.” Party! Oh no not now! I thought we were supposed to stay inside and be on our best behavior! Oh God the worst part; I have to wear a dress! I hate those; I prefer to stick to my jeans. My mom helped me put it on. She said I looked beautiful and I really did, but I just did not feel any comfortable, plus I was extremely exhausted. Well I will just go and pretend to fall asleep, my dad will carry me inside and I will be able to take this stupid thing off.


Wow! This party is huge! I believe this is the party where my mom has invited the most people. Okay so I will go see if I know anybody. Well everyone seems to know me, but I do not really recognize any of them. Oh there is daddy! I will run ti him so I can sleep in his arms. Wait, who is that? Great, its that girl my mom dislikes so bad. My mom says she is bad and that we should stay away from her. I believe my daddy calls her Jen. “Brad Shiloh has got so big! I cannot believe it, she looks just like you!” ok Woman can you please stop touching me! After a while, my mom finally took me and I fell asleep. That was a great nap, I needed that. Hey this is not my house! Where am I? Mommy! Daddy! Maddox! “Shiloh be quiet! SHH! Now listen to me very carefully, you are going to be fine, I just want to teach a little lesson to your mom about messing with the people others love.” It is that Jen girl! Mom was right, she is bad! Oh no I want to go home. Well this house is not so bad after all, I can watch all the TV I want, eat what I want, and if cry I annoy that woman which is much better. Hey that is me on the television! People are looking for me? There is my mom and she is crying! Oh no I am running away, I need to make my mom stop crying. The door is open, perfect opportunity. “Now where do you think you are going? You are not going anywhere missy. Now get back up in the room.” This crazy woman got really mad, she dragged me top the room and slapped me and said that if I did not stop crying my mom was really going to get hurt. I do not want that. What do I do? I need to call mommy. Hey dad showed a number to call in case of an emergency. I will do that. Wait Shiloh get yourself together; stop crying or the old lady will listen to you. Ok so here I go, 9-1-1! “What is your emergency?” “My name is Shiloh and I want to go back with my mom, I saw on TV and want her to stop crying.” “Oh my God it is Shiloh! We found her! Trace the call! Where is she? It is Jenifer Aniston’s house! Ok honey relax, we are on out way.” Ok so that should work. “What did you just do? You crazy little brat! You just ruined everything!” I started running, now she got really angry and started beating me. I need her to stop, it hurts! Mommy! Hey I fell asleep, that was weird. “Oh Shiloh Honey you are okay! I was so worried!” Hey it is mom and dad! Where is the old lady? “Baby don’t worry about that woman again, she won’t hurt you. Well Jen, apparently I win again.”

Pictures:

http://www.thecutekid.com/parent-center/wp-content/uploads/2009/09/shiloh-jolie-pitt.jpg  08/29/10
http://celebritysurgery.net/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/Jennifer-Aniston.jpg 08/29/10

33 Miners trapped in a mine in Chile are found ok after 17 days!!!

http://news.yahoo.com/s/ap/20100823/ap_on_bi_ge/lt_chile_mine_collapse

1. 17 days ago, a mine in Santiago Chile collapsed and 33 miners were trapped inside. After all the worrying and agony from the loved ones and authorities, the miners are found perfectly safe at the mines shelter. The miners sent a note stating that they were all fine, and the president Sebastian Pinera waved it to Chile's people. All of Chile celebrated happyness.

2.  Many people are involved in this article. It begins the president of Chile saying that all of the miners are fine. Then its talks about the 33 miners and the plan to how they will be rescued. It also includes many rescue teams from many parts of the world like the US, Australia, and of coarse Chile.

3. Something wrong with this article, is that the author out of nowhere starts talking about a miners event in the US that lasted seven days. Maybe the author wanted to establish a relationship of events between the two accidents, but does not make it clear. There is a small bias in this article. The author is stating that after the miners were found okay, the entire population of Chile gathered around in joy and excitement. I believe that the only ones doing this would be the miners' loved ones. Most of the people would be relived that they were found okay, but they would not have gone to celebrate to the Plaza Italia as the author stated. Also, from what the author explains, he makes it seem as if the US was directing the rescue. There is a statement where an american rescuer says that what his team is doing, is logical thing to do; in a very minimizing manner. After the miners where found ok, they explained how they would get food, water, and oxygen over to the miners. These are their essentials to survive. Sanitation is also something they need. It is rumored that the miners will be rescued in about four months, and throughout this period of time, where will they do common necesities such as urinating? This lack of sanitation in such a crowoded area could actually end up killing them. So they should think of a way to ensure that it does not happen.

4. In all, I believe that this was a great article. I read about the accident before and thought that it would be really hard to rescue the miners. Fortunately they were found and alive. After they installed a probe from which they can communicate with the miners, a man said that this would help on keeping the miners alive because through this they could communicate with their loved ones. Psychologically this will maintain their spirits in shape. One of the miners stated "God is great and will keep us alive. Patience is all that we need." He is right; all they need to do is be patient and stay strong.

http://msnbcmedia3.msn.com/j/reuters/2010-08-07t212755z_01_btre6761nmm00_rtroptp_3_chile-mine.grid-6x2.jpg  08/22/10